Wednesday, September 21, 2011

Those Days Haiku - 21

Image Courtesy Dover Publications

Feather touch /
Smile encased bubbles /
Childhood dreams //

*3-5-3 format

For the Height of Haiku Challenge At Haiku Heights

12 Musings:

Anonymous said...

Tough format this, I always think - the middle line works especially nicely for me though.

Saras said...

Indeed bubbles are such fun for the children that they go on playing.

blue ocean waves said...

love it!


Ramesh Sood said...

Very beautiful this!

Anonymous said...

Lovely image.

andy sewina said...

The stuff of dreams!

Nanka said...

Seems much fun for highly imaginative minds of little children!!

Traci B said...

Fantastic use of the 3-5-3 format, and a gem of a haiku. :)

Anonymous said...

A great haiku.
I liked the 3-5-3 format.

dsnake1 said...

love the second line, it's beautiful. :)

Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-Walton said...

perfect job.

you have two blogs?

if you did not submit to poets rally yet, welcome in.

thanks for the support.

Apoyando said...

Smile encased bubbles. The smile was there as long as the bubble was there to encase it.
One my my recent post revolves around the same theme. "The childhood dream"