Tough format this, I always think - the middle line works especially nicely for me though.
Indeed bubbles are such fun for the children that they go on playing.
love it!divine!
Very beautiful this!
Lovely image.
The stuff of dreams!
Seems much fun for highly imaginative minds of little children!!
Fantastic use of the 3-5-3 format, and a gem of a haiku. :)
A great haiku.I liked the 3-5-3 format.
love the second line, it's beautiful. :)
perfect job.you have two blogs?if you did not submit to poets rally yet, welcome in.thanks for the support.
Smile encased bubbles. The smile was there as long as the bubble was there to encase it. One my my recent post revolves around the same theme. "The childhood dream"
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Tough format this, I always think - the middle line works especially nicely for me though.
Indeed bubbles are such fun for the children that they go on playing.
love it!
divine!
Very beautiful this!
Lovely image.
The stuff of dreams!
Seems much fun for highly imaginative minds of little children!!
Fantastic use of the 3-5-3 format, and a gem of a haiku. :)
A great haiku.
I liked the 3-5-3 format.
love the second line, it's beautiful. :)
perfect job.
you have two blogs?
if you did not submit to poets rally yet, welcome in.
thanks for the support.
Smile encased bubbles. The smile was there as long as the bubble was there to encase it.
One my my recent post revolves around the same theme. "The childhood dream"
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