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| Courtesy Magpie |
Weary feet in step
with the world's drum
a casual glance reveals
the carefully constructed
facade still in place.
Some normal days
solace brings along
the journey thus far
highly strung nerves
like a coiled spring
never knowing when
dim courage has bolted...
A nervous tick belies
the hidden tremors awakening
blood splattered walls
lemon souffle and fork
the nightmare begins....
Sympathetic voices
wake up to
a year ago
seems much longer
our last meal
before they took her
my only child
draped in blood
darkness covers
as they burgled along...
9 Musings:
subtle and lucid
ohhhhhh sad..
Bikram's
Tragedy, so calmly expressed.
Well written sorrow.
What a gory tale... :)
nice poem
Oh nooo!! The end really was shocking and vivid!!!
Beautifully written though!! A truly moving piece, my friend... effective in its subtlety...
And the coloring was done to perfection!!
Such a poignant and heartbreaking piece.
Mine is at:
http://rnsane.blogspot.com/2011/03/magpie-tales-55-its-not-nice-to-eat.html#links
By the way, I watche "No One Killed Jessica" last night. That was such a sad story.
lovely..
love your blog, your poetry is impressive!
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