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| Jean Baptiste Corot 1845 |
The windmill slows down /
Soft footsteps on the stone floor /
My heart picks up speed //
For the Height Of Haiku Challenge
Added to Haiku Heights
poetry picnic week 111, World Peace in May,
1 week ago
10 Musings:
Nice contrast of slowing down and picking up speed...perfect~
most excellent photo!!! and the 'ku is a wonderful tale
A whole story and atmosphere in three lines: you have captured my imagination.
I like the tale you tell.
A great haiku.
Paints an image of mystery - whose footsteps?
Nice Haiku. You have created a mystery in three lines. I think the footsteps belong to a lover. Well done.
Melanie
Ah, I wonder who it could be :) There is definitely a mystery here :D
I,too, am listening to those faint footsteps...
No Windmill Here!
Great scene setting in this one; it takes the imagination all sorts of places. Is it a lover approaching, or someone with evil intent? So many questions...
Yeah, nicely!
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